
Like: I like the idea of the piece, the printed text background. I like the holes. I like the way the text shows but you can’t really read it. I like the circular stitching to counter the geometric shapes. I like the beaded peace sign. I like the way the pieces “intrude” into the border. Like the color choices.
Dislike: The scale of the two major lines is too thin. The middle piece should be larger and more prominent. The scale of writing is too large for the size of the piece. Very flat, not much dimension (other than the beading). Very busy, little focus.
New Techniques: Writing text on fabric. Circular spiral stitching.
Text: Imagine peace. Visualize peace. Teach peace. Think peace. Act peacefully. Make art for peace. Feel peace. See peace. Walk for peace. Sing for peace. Dance for peace. Peace not war. Make art not war. Educator for peace. Mother for peace. Grandmother for peace. War is not the only option. Dialogue for peace. Amazing peace. Peace in my soul. Piece for peace. Stitch for peace. Partner with peace. Dream of peace. Time for peace. “Peace is not just the absence of war.” “Peace will enter when hate is gone.” Walk the talk of peace. “Peace. It does not mean to be in a place where there is no noise, trouble or hard work. It means to be in the midst of those things and be calm in your heart.”
1 comment:
I like how you have analyzed this piece...the things you like and dislike, and the new techniques you incorporated. I would like to do this with new work in my journal. Thanks for the idea!
And your chosen text is wonderful.
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